Please don't be mad this is just a feedback to help you develop.
The graphics was fine when playing it, love the style and effort you put into this game. Its atmosphere was creepy, really give the vibe that this place was hunted (good job) and I was excited.
But what lower thrill when playing this game is that there were too many notes on the floor and each note contains a lot of words. (Recommend to only get the important parts of the story)
The font size was small, that you need to go closer to monitor when reading it. (Find the perfect font size for the player when reading it, from his/her chair to the monitor)
Idea:
fix the menu
add a fade in fade out, to the pop-out timer text (the one that every time when the clock bell rings)
improve jump scares
add settings to the game like sounds or the volume.
I recommend you make more horror games (I like it's environment), you just need some improvements that's all.
Also I had a 1st reaction video about to ur game.
It never finish the game, because the game is to hard for me (puzzle) and I hate reading (sorry).
{but I had some fun while playing it tho don't worry}
But either way, hope this makes you smile and enjoy this video. (note the video is private, so yeah if your interested and want to see it. Pls reply me back and leave a link to your Gmail account according to google so I can send you the video).
Good job dev, and good luck with your next game :) <3.
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Dear Dev,
Please don't be mad this is just a feedback to help you develop.
The graphics was fine when playing it, love the style and effort you put into this game. Its atmosphere was creepy, really give the vibe that this place was hunted (good job) and I was excited.
But what lower thrill when playing this game is that there were too many notes on the floor and each note contains a lot of words. (Recommend to only get the important parts of the story)
The font size was small, that you need to go closer to monitor when reading it. (Find the perfect font size for the player when reading it, from his/her chair to the monitor)
Idea:
fix the menu
add a fade in fade out, to the pop-out timer text (the one that every time when the clock bell rings)
improve jump scares
add settings to the game like sounds or the volume.
I recommend you make more horror games (I like it's environment), you just need some improvements that's all.
Also I had a 1st reaction video about to ur game.
It never finish the game, because the game is to hard for me (puzzle) and I hate reading (sorry).
{but I had some fun while playing it tho don't worry}
But either way, hope this makes you smile and enjoy this video. (note the video is private, so yeah if your interested and want to see it. Pls reply me back and leave a link to your Gmail account according to google so I can send you the video).
Good job dev, and good luck with your next game :) <3.
POG!